Saturday, July 28, 2007

Sour Grapes
for M.G.S.

not difficult at all
for her to find marijuana,
not surprising to find she's smoking
when her dad left marijuana
in her genes pocket,
in a packet in her genes


© Obediah Michael Smith, 2007
8:18 p.m. 28/07/07

4 Comments:

Blogger Esquire of the mountain said...

why cant the marijuana in the genes packet take a recessive form, do we not all possess parts of defects in our own gene packets but indeed(probably through the grace of God) overcome..so indeed my dear friend i disagree that the marijuana she smokes was left in her gene pocket by her father but you know what the imagery gene/jean pocket is beautiful

Saturday, July 28, 2007 11:16:00 PM  
Blogger Sonia said...

I love the jeans/genes play on sound of words...that's just fantastic. Very clever.

Saturday, July 28, 2007 11:40:00 PM  
Blogger Obie Quiet said...

And you're very nice to come to see what my mind might have picked up or put down. I have a handful of Sonia�s in my heart at present; stored under one or the other of the four loves, ������ ����� �� or ����. Which of my Sonia�s is this?

Are you wearing perfume, dab of perfume and nothing else? Oh, what clue for a blind man?

Do you not dare claim poem written especially for you, �Until Day Clean,� by affixing some comment beside it?

Thanks for passing through, passing into my senses; though I've concluded you're timid, you�re shy. I love you for stopping by. Bye!

Sunday, July 29, 2007 12:28:00 AM  
Blogger Obie Quiet said...

Esquire of the mountain,
It is in what follows, I see, that you put your faith. I thank you for sympathy for the father:

(Jeremiah 31:29-30)
"In those days they shall say no more, The fathers have eaten a sour grape, and the children's teeth are set on edge. But every one shall die for his own iniquity: each man who eats the sour grape, his teeth will be set on edge."

Sunday, July 29, 2007 1:16:00 AM  

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