Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Screw or We’re Screwed

what or who are we undoing
when we do what we do
when we do what we feel we must
when we do what advances us

who or what is being undone, unraveled
who or what is being unwound
when we wind


© Obediah Michael Smith, 2009
12:10 a.m. 12.06.09

3 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Anyone who so chooses to be. Who has the right to judge what is poetry?

Friday, July 17, 2009 5:58:00 PM  
Blogger Obie Quiet said...

To my mind, Anonymous, it is not a matter of judging. It is instead a matter of knowing.

Do you not know water when you taste it - bathe in it or wade in it?

Friday, July 17, 2009 11:21:00 PM  
Blogger Esquire of the mountain said...

newton's laws; for every action there is an opposite and equal reaction..today i saw a poem describing physics!

Monday, July 27, 2009 6:45:00 PM  

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