for T.L.C.
i.
blood-let a poem
out of me while I live
tiny tot has tickled me
with what I know not
unable to unknot
all knotted up in lines of verse
naughty poetry,
rope about a tree
after all, after weeks
verse together
attached to her
pull, inseparable
ii.
center of the book,
staples through us
tiny holes hold us together
pierce us, cause pain
make intimate, make us
to come apart,
we’d have to be
ripped apart, torn apart
have an apple,
have a heart
iii.
advantage to take
of who is less
than five feet tall
who is short of self-esteem
though I suggest
I’ve come to bring some
is my desire to see
what I might get away with
while tide is low
see how far I can go
walk out to sea
before the water’s over my head
before tide comes in again
out a mile or two
too far to swim to shore
before I’m out of breath
what is the length
and breadth of her,
the height and depth of her
as interested in her
as land I wished to purchase
I’ve an exquisite structure
in mind to erect
I want to pitch a roof
over our heads
iv.
I was in Inagua
when she was born
in what month is her birthday
I was 32 when she was born
what can she offer me
what or who am I empty for
were I to swallow her
would I be full or empty still,
hungry still
is she meat or drink,
air or just image
able to fill my eye
but not where there’s a hole inside
whole lot a women,
I choose a child
I’d need SMA
to keep her alive
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2007
10:04 a.m. 28.12.07
1 Comments:
I enjoyed the opening line:
"blood-let a poem out of me while I live."
And found the ending quite amusing:
"I'd need SMA to keep her alive."
And image I did not like:
"as interesting in her as land..." I felt as though it slowed the poem down and was not half as beautiful or clever as the lines surrounding it.
The poem overall though was great, interesting, honest and not over reaching, just right.
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