Years End [chorus]
for t.l.c.
this girl and I
have we come together
or have we come apart
same someone who
saved my life tonight
has tonight broken my heart
is broken-hearted,
heartless though
the way to go
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2007
4:17 p.m. 30.12.07
for t.l.c.
this girl and I
have we come together
or have we come apart
same someone who
saved my life tonight
has tonight broken my heart
is broken-hearted,
heartless though
the way to go
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2007
4:17 p.m. 30.12.07
posted by Obie Quiet at 4:29 PM
1 Comments:
I love this poem's title. The poem though lacks something, it's not as spicy I thought it would be. The structure of the poem shows great discipline which is something I have to work on, so this a good lead for me to follow. The irony in the second stanza is what gives the poem life...thats my favourite part.
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