Revisit It
for T.L.C.
threw up in your draws
now I fill it
with poems
fill it with flowers
my apology
do you accept it
do you accept me
want to be able
to look in your draws
to get into them
pull them off
pull them out
shove them shut
miss pussy, how it tastes
miss its meow
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2008
2:20 p.m. 30.01.08
for T.L.C.
threw up in your draws
now I fill it
with poems
fill it with flowers
my apology
do you accept it
do you accept me
want to be able
to look in your draws
to get into them
pull them off
pull them out
shove them shut
miss pussy, how it tastes
miss its meow
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2008
2:20 p.m. 30.01.08
posted by Obie Quiet at 3:58 PM
1 Comments:
I'm unsure of what the beginning line, and the last stanza really means. In the second stanza I like the repetition of, "do you accept" the repetition seems like an extension of the apology which the stanza opens with. It also gives a humble feel to the overall poem when the others stanzas are far more aggressive.
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