Look A Job
i.
had a job to give her
for her to be on
wanted her to get on it
to get on with it
wanted her to start without delay
job he whipped up, whipped out
frightened her away
ii.
looking for a job
went to see her M.P.
only to find her M.P.
looking for a blow job
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2008
6:58 p.m. 20.04.08
i.
had a job to give her
for her to be on
wanted her to get on it
to get on with it
wanted her to start without delay
job he whipped up, whipped out
frightened her away
ii.
looking for a job
went to see her M.P.
only to find her M.P.
looking for a blow job
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2008
6:58 p.m. 20.04.08
posted by Obie Quiet at 9:21 PM
3 Comments:
I heard of an instance similar to this. Interesting topic, I like the short length. It suggests how quickly the action takes place, how quickly we can get our hopes up, only to be let down.
Shorty: "...hope up, only to be let down" - do you mean the M.P. or his constituent? And which action actually - oral sex until there is an orgasm? Is it really so quickly concluded?
Does the poem imply that the M.P. gets his wishes - his rocks off? I am interested in what transpires at the point the poem establishes. Does it suggest arriving at an impasse or is the bridge created where M.P. and constituent meet, crossed in opposite directions to their mutual fulfillment?
this was amazing...both in need of jobs...but indeed..mutual difference in the nature of job...amazing!
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