for D.B.A.
as I did before
I began looking too late
for her building
off East Street,
Stainless Steel
sign upon it
words to end a poem
on a building like a gift
like a message
her poem about love
about how it works
about whether it works
thoughts of love inspired
by radio station, 98.7
piping love songs
she in her mom’s car
awaiting her return
listening to love songs
she wonders if love
could be trusted
relied upon
what percentage of the time
or does it malfunction
needing/in need of WD40
or does it rust, lose its edge
its sheen
sign on that building
business which supplies
steel which resists stains
resists staining
what of love though
was this building, sign upon it
insurance, reassurance
some guarantee about love
that it sustains unblemished
untarnished
whatever weather
it might be or might
have been left out in
rain upon it, sun upon it
spit upon it, shit upon it
able to wash it off
and good to go
like when creation
commenced
on the first morning
of the world
when the whirl began
© Obediah Michael Smith, 2010
4:52 p.m. 30.05.10
1 Comments:
As expected the 'remake' of Stainless Steel is quite successful. Amazing how an analysis or comment of my poem craeted a poem. I am so glad to be a part(in a different way) of your work.
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