Friday, January 04, 2008

Give A Girl A Whirl
for T.L.C.

we have a way
of disrobing each other
an order to follow
steps to observe

she demands cooperation
so do I

when to take the arms out
when to lift the legs
when exactly to release what

like shelling peas
like shucking corn
or stripping bark away
to leave the coconut’s
ball shell bare
white meat or jelly inside

crack it, let the water waste
or save it, careful
is what’s required

how reckless I was
our last encounter
fucked up the steps

stripped her too quickly
not even her panties
left upon her, all in one go

she was livid, left the bed,
the room, banged the door

it seems she does not love me
any more

her wish always is
that we take it slow

went too fast--she’s 21, I'm 62
almost out of time

she has all the time in the world

want to give a girl a whirl, a world
while I’m able
she wants time to set the mood,
the table


© Obediah Michael Smith, 2008
8:13 a.m. 04.01.08

1 Comments:

Blogger Esquire of the mountain said...

the alllusion to a 21 having all the time vs a 62 yr old is timeless...i would thus suppose that all the young men who come too fast are 62 year olds in 21 yrs' skins?
classic otherwise

Saturday, January 05, 2008 8:46:00 PM  

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